Hey, schreib Montag eine Englisch-Arbeit und muss wahrscheinlich einen Pro-Conta Text über das Thema -death penalty- schreiben.
Kann mir vielleicht jemand sagen ob die Grammatik soweit in Ordnung ist?
Jetzt schonmal Danke!!!
At the time, many people around the world discuss about the death penalty, it behooves each themselves how correctly he finds this, but we can us on the basis of objective advantages and disadvantages a better and professional opinion about this topic of dispute build. A few people say it is the only way to stop crime, but who says that the man is not able to learn from his mistakes which he made? But it's hard to generalize this. And if times there an innocent, who was wrongly sentenced to death, you can never undo it. You can see the death penalty is something final, however can commit no criminal sentenced to death per a crime again. But it must be said also that the death penalty is a cheap way to punish a crime, and that the families of the victims often fell better when they know that the murderer of their family member is death. Quite clearly, however, the death penalty is a violation of human rights! It is also important that we never forget that the death of a person reverse the death of another. Now it is himself left to each as he thinks about the death penalty, but never forget there is always someone who thinks differently and that is ok, too!